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Our limp bodies lay on the stone floor of his basement. One simple 12-watt bulb (which by the way was continually flickering) hung above us leaving our peripheral vision at an all time low. I grasped his hands as best I could and brushed them gently against the side of my face. He breathed out deeply and then had trouble breathing it in again. I gripped his hand extremely tight and began to sob, slightly gagging on the dirty fabric tied around my mouth. He pulled himself close to me and began to hum, (the best someone could with a filthy rag in their mouth) I began to sing along with him. Perfect harmony. The sound rang through my ears soothing me to the point sleep, something that I haven’t done in days, something that was dangerous, something that might cost me my life…
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the continuation... [link]

yup...

~ Roxi :heart:
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~Doodlebug-love:iconDoodlebug-love: Feb 12, 2008, 6:36:40 PM
Yes, because its confussing, and there is only one way to find out more. It brings so many questions
Do it Do it! ; B

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Why do we kill people, who kill people, to show people, that killing people is bad?
~eager4damnation:iconeager4damnation: Feb 12, 2008, 7:25:45 PM
kool...thx... i need to see what other people think as well then if most say yes i should continue, then i will!

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amazing artist!!![link] :heart: :heart: check him out!!

"so what if im a puppet... once upon a time... you were too!"

"where can i buy a phone?"
~captaincabbage:iconcaptaincabbage: Feb 12, 2008, 10:19:59 PM
Yes, because it's just really well written! :D
Surprisingly good! Most of the stuff I read on Dev is just emo poetry.

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When I'm weak, I draw strength from you,
and when you're sad I know how to change your mood.
When I'm down you breath life over me,
Although we're miles apart we are each other's destiny.
~the-flamingo-girl:iconthe-flamingo-girl: Feb 13, 2008, 12:03:04 AM
yay! confusingness! please continue

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DID YOU KNOW:
flamingos are pink because of the carotene in their food.
there are more fake plastic flamingos in america than real ones.
a flamingos eye is bigger than its brain.
flamingos are COOL.
=masked-racoon:iconmasked-racoon: Feb 13, 2008, 1:37:24 AM
YES!
This is looking really creepy, weird and fantabulas
i demand a sequel, DEMAND IT! :shakefist:
XD

is it going anywhere?

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there are so many lies in the world today
and someone's got to tell them.....
*Thettamore:iconThettamore: Feb 13, 2008, 7:52:24 AM
Hmmm . . . quite interesting. Quite. Is it supposed to represent something? I like it, overall.

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"It's not an obsession! . . . Just an extreme interest." :bucktooth:
~haloangel1:iconhaloangel1: Feb 13, 2008, 8:31:05 AM
CURSES!!!!! MY POWER IS GONNA GO OUT FUCK THAT YES YES YES!!!!

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Great Googlely-Mooglely!
~roses-of-thorns:iconroses-of-thorns: Feb 13, 2008, 8:46:37 AM
yes? I haven't read it yet! XD lolz

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So what if I am a puppet, once upon a time... YOU WERE TOO!
~roses-of-thorns:iconroses-of-thorns: Feb 13, 2008, 8:48:14 AM
wow... totally! if u make it a book, this would be perfect for the back! ... but with a bit more info on what's going on...

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So what if I am a puppet, once upon a time... YOU WERE TOO!
~eager4damnation:iconeager4damnation: Feb 13, 2008, 8:49:00 AM
hey thanks... i just couldn't get the image of a teenage couple lying on the floor of a basement bound and gagged... and it was annoying me so i just decided to turn it into a story... thanks a lot for your opinion!! :hug:

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amazing artist!!![link] :heart: :heart: check him out!!

"so what if im a puppet... once upon a time... you were too!"

"where can i buy a phone?"